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Thursday, May 9, 2019

🌊Ocean🌊

3 comments:

  1. i like the way you used descriptive words in your wrriting

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  2. i really like your writing.
    i really like the way you described the seagulls.
    next time you could change the font of your writing

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  3. I realy liked how you used atinims and I also liked your writing
    but mabe next time you can change your font so its more readable

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