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i like the way you used descriptive words in your wrriting
ReplyDeletei really like your writing.
ReplyDeletei really like the way you described the seagulls.
next time you could change the font of your writing
ReplyDeleteI realy liked how you used atinims and I also liked your writing
but mabe next time you can change your font so its more readable